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My first attempt at making a tune


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sounding good steve..if a little short. great piano section (did you do that yourself or rip ot from another song?) vocals go well with it too

the beat could do with a little cleaning up though as it seems a bit distorted

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sounding good so far

 

my only recommendation would be to give the drums some swing and liveliness to them. they feel a bit to cut up and stiff when compared to the piano/bassline

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really nice mate, the pitch of the drums could do with being tweaked a bit, to my ears the snare is a bit flat...? does sound lovely though. moog up a bassline!

 

peez

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sounding good so far

 

my only recommendation would be to give the drums some swing and liveliness to them.  they feel a bit to cut up and stiff when compared to the piano/bassline

 

Those drums sound like a looped break to me, not programmed.

 

Nice beat tho, the samples ill....shame it's been used before (like most ill samples).

 

Props Steve.

 

pz

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Thanks for the feedback! It's not really a piece of production - it's just 3 tunes chopped up and rearranged. The beat is a break, but I chopped that up a little bit too. I'll try and get it finished soon.

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sounding good so far

 

my only recommendation would be to give the drums some swing and liveliness to them.  they feel a bit to cut up and stiff when compared to the piano/bassline

 

Those drums sound like a looped break to me, not programmed.

 

Nice beat tho, the samples ill....shame it's been used before (like most ill samples).

 

Props Steve.

 

pz

 

Then the drummer was a bit stiff. Listen to the ghost snares.

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