DeriveOne Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 yeah so me and my girlfriend's one year anniversary is comin up and I wanted to do somethin special for her.. I know I couldnt do the poem thing or any of that, so I decided to make her a song...I guess it's my way of doin things... "The Very Thought" http://s42.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1FHWXV8...OB09UH11NY8XWY4 lyrics: the very thought of you (echo) the very thought of you (echo) The very thought of youand I forget to dothe little ordinary things that everyone ought to doI'm living in a kind of daydreamI'm happy as a kingand foolish though it may seemto me it's everything... The mere idea of youthe mere idea of you (echo)the longing here for youand I forget to do (echo)you'll never know how slow the moments gountil I'm near to youI see your face in every floweryour eyes in stars aboveit's just the thought of youthe very thought of youmy love... tell me if yall thing it's too much or if I should change anything... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattnice Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 nice im likin this she better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeriveOne Posted August 18, 2005 Author Share Posted August 18, 2005 that's what I'm hoping... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
airnino Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 yeah, it's really nice. the vocal samples are cool too; i was a little scared that you might sing/ rap them yourself haha...just kidding. peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Deeswift Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 Hehe. You sloppy git. Nice one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barnstormer Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 Ha dope man. peace. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TyraFromSaigon Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 aww thats sweet. i was hoping u were going to sing the lyrics. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clownstyle Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 Im sure she will love it man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dub-Se7en Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 soppy fucker Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cbay Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 thats fuckin sick. what a dope idea for anniversaries hehe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alkatrazz Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 hey man thats cool gift. CREATIVITY BITCHESSSS dont leave home with ought it.. Nice stuff man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djxander Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 dope... where the og lyrics from? nice scratched high hats... i may have gone for some less inyaface! drums, but all good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tekniq Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 any possibility of recording it into an mp3......i cant fux wif that file format. kthx...1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeriveOne Posted August 19, 2005 Author Share Posted August 19, 2005 glad everybody was feeling what I was trying to do!! I let her hear it today and she cried in happiness...she loved it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cbay Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 man who wouldnt, thats such a dope track. for real man. if i was good enough i'd make my girl a track Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlipFlop Posted August 20, 2005 Share Posted August 20, 2005 DOPE!!! first half of the vocals coulda been up a slight bit,but other than that,it was reallllll dope man!! goodddd ish!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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