alkatrazz Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 So i finally got out of my beat slump and came up with this its like 90% done but i cant think of anything else to add. Listen if you can and let me know what you guys think. Always my first critics cuz i get some constructive stuff. thanks again. Lovely Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alkatrazz Posted November 21, 2006 Author Share Posted November 21, 2006 p.s. Steve those cuts you did for the other song were raw man please feel free to add to the rest of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pand Malone Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Really liking this mate. Well done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alkatrazz Posted November 21, 2006 Author Share Posted November 21, 2006 thanks fellas really appreciate the listen. any suggestions as to improving something or anything? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wax On Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 personally i'd change the drums, something with more of an organic feel. its tight though, nicely arranged and full of variation Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
broma Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Yea this is cool but what Wax On said with the drums. I like the shaker sound but the bass and snare don't work so well - could be they just need loosening up a little. They sound a bit too tight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alkatrazz Posted November 21, 2006 Author Share Posted November 21, 2006 aight cool, i can see that for sure that snare sounds very very tight and not in the good sense. Allright ill try to check with some softer sounding drums. haha the reasons i chose those drums is because im super bass heavy i love shit that thumps my blood loose and ive been arranging this on system with huge woofers so i get carried away sometimes. thanks fellas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
denio Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 niiiice shit......but i really hate the basedrum and the snare tp be honest...some live sounding drums would be smooth here...round it up with some crashes and another percussion maybe...my two cents peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that guy from P.A. Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 i like tha horns alot...but i agree with the basedrum point.. i like how you bring it back......after tha hook.... good breakdowns......all around a real nice piece of work... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alkatrazz Posted November 22, 2006 Author Share Posted November 22, 2006 thanks again fellas, im trying out different drums now. thanks all the feedbacks great. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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